Submission Samples from the Drama Genre

Title: Revenge

Logline: Jack Sims is a corporate attorney who violently kills seven people after his doctor informs him that he is dying; he started his killing list when he was twelve.

Synopsis: The twists in Jack's life are as unique as his methods of killing and his ability to stymie the police. For years he stocks his attic with clothes, tools, hardware, equipment, a pistol and bullets. After each killing he bundles things he used or touched, and throws the bundle into a body of water with a weight inside to keep it submerged. He is consumed with so much hatred and desire for revenge that he chokes with his hands, strangles with strings of thin wire, crushes skulls with a rock and hammer, and shoots his pistol through a ninety year old woman's ear. He demonstrates other sadistic acts such as driving an iron spike up an anus until feces come out,and by making a sister of one of his targets for murder perform oral sex on him, then he leaves samples of the feces and semen at the scene of his other victims. One year after the murders he marries a beautiful criminal defense attorney that he mentored twenty years earlier and who has been in love with him since.

Title: Twilight

Logline: A junky DEA agent infiltrates his estranged father's drug cartel in order to track down his partner's killer.

Synopsis: DEA special agent Marcos Villanova seeks justice for the murder of his partner and mentor -- a rogue agent known as Wolf -- at the hands of Cuban crime boss Ramon Ortega. The Agency is willing to give him what he wants...for a price: an impenetrable ease built against his father, Arthur" Buddy" Lomax, a powerful New York drug kingpin with secret lies to Ortega. Marcos arrives at Buddy's doorstep a broken man, looking for new direction in life. All part of the act, or is it? Isabella Suarez, a smoldering Latina stripper, sees more in Marcos than he lets on. As does Buddy's underboss, Tony "Ram" Rammazatto, a loose cannon who'll do anything to keep his spot on the food chain. The more time Marcos spends in Buddy's care, the less willing he is to betray him. In the end, Marcos must decide where his loyalty truly lies: with the U.S. Government, his father, or somewhere in between.

Title: Somewhere Else in Time

Logline: A MAN VISITS THE PAST (1912 Grand Hotel, Macinac Island, MI) TO RE-LIVE A LOST LOVE AND RETURNS TO FIND THAT LOVE IN HIS PRESENT LIFE.

Synopsis: 30 years after the release of the 1980 movie, "Somewhere in Time," this interesting story is due a revisit. The unexplained questions of who the original Richard is, the provenance of the watch, the registration book and why Richard can't return again to 1912 can be resolved when the story is expanded by a useful prequel. A derivative allows a more hopeful ending than the lost soul of Richard doomed to a starvation-suicide in order to join his beloved in an alarmingly unimaginative picture of an afterlife. His final, earthly view of Elise had been of a beautifully ravished, glowing woman, who, in death, reverts to the distant, elusive photograph - an Elise found out of time rather than in it, as promised by the original movie title. Trite and disappointing. The rewrite combines new story elements with the poignancy of a young, beautiful and so-very mobile Christopher Reeve to produce a screenplay that may generate the box-office and critical success denied the original movie.

Title: Intensive Supervision

Logline: An Army veteran resiliently pursues a career as an inner city probation/parole officer.

Synopsis: Mark Norris is a highly decorated Gulf War veteran and loving family man. With a relentless spirit to serve his community, he embarks on his second career as an inner city probation/parole officer. Mark is meticulously handpicked to be the Intensive Supervision Probation Officer. Intensive Supervision is a unique level of supervision which oversees violent and mentally unstable offenders. Despite these extreme demands placed on him, he is determined to succeed where others have failed. Mark soon realizes that the politics of the criminal justice system, as well as other unforeseen circumstances are about to get the best of him in the worst way.

Title: Homestead, America

Logline: The year is 1891. Kristina has made the trip from her home in Czechoslovakia, losing her child, to discover herself caught up in one of the most dramatic and important events in American history.

Synopsis: In the year 1891 Kristina Iranova is a Czechoslovakian immigrant struggling to make it in America. The promise of work in the booming steel industry town brings her to Homestead, Pennsylvania, where she is caught up in one of the most significant events in American history, the Homestead Steel Strike. While she is not a steelworker herself, she has found a new life with another immigrant, William, and his son. By the summer of 1892 things are looking promising for the young families in Homestead. While the union workers are more organized than ever, the power behind Andrew Carnegie's political and financial interest plot to break the union from any foothold, and eventually are successful in defeating their workers in a bloody battle; a night that would change the American labor movement forever, and personally effect the lives of the thousands of families that depended on the steel mills, including Kristina's.

Title: A Story About Love

Logline: Love will cause liberation and tragedy among Philadelphia's rich and powerful social elite

Synopsis: Celia Bedford is a poor but strikingly beautiful widow and mother. Her sickly soon to be 14 year old son Timmy is a mathematical prodigy with an IQ of 170. Celia leaves Atlantic City to take a job as a live-in housekeeper in the mansion of Philadelphia socialites Margo and Robert Harrington, at the behest of her aunt Gwenyfred who is the Harrington's cook. Aunt Gwen is very concerned about Celia who is still grieving over the loss of her late husband who died in a trucking accident two years earlier. She wants Celia near her in order to watch over her in this trying time in her life. As soon as Celia and Timmy arrive, things begin to fall completely apart in the Harrington's very troubled marriage. It's love at first sight for Robert and Celia while Timmy develops a serious crush on Margo's 17 year old daughter Tara. Lustful and unfaithful Margo battles in vain to hold on to Robert, while Tara uses Timmy's crush on her to make her ex-boyfriend jealous, resulting in tragedy.

Title: Illusions

Logline: Two brothers create a religion to make money. They did not realize the impact they had on the souls of everyday man, least of all, their own.

Synopsis: Orphaned brothers, John and Andrew Taylor, struggle to maintain their lives. In a moment of suffering, John, drunk at their usual watering hole after loosing his job, is helped out of the bar by Andrew, but not before the pair catch the news report of a cult discovered that swindled followers out of millions. They decide to create a religion themselves and reap the benefits. After five years of growth, the brothers have evolved into prophet businessmen. Their religion has reached the far corners of the globe and gains momentum. Enough momentum to attract the attention of government agencies including the FBI. The brothers become accustomed to their new lifestyle and work hard to maintain it, even so far as murder. Dodging the government, assassins and each other, the brothers come face to face with the monster they have created. WGA registered #1252222, written by Stan Rubakhin and James R. Johnson.

Title: A Thousand Days

Logline: Her husband died over a year ago. Her mind has yet to catch up.

Synopsis: Taylor and Connor James are a loving, devoted couple celebrating their anniversary this coming weekend. The romantic getaway Taylor had planned, is suddenly interrupted when Connor is called away on business. Disappointed, she takes advantage of her pre-arranged plans and decides to make the trip alone. While staying at a picturesque bed and breakfast, she finds herself drawn to a shy, young widower named Aaron Michelson. Though their relationship is purely platonic, the two find solace in each other - filling a void in both their hearts. But their friendship is brought to a halt when the two realize they share more in common than either ever imagined as Taylor learns that her husband died over a year ago. It's the story of lost love and the oftentimes incomprehensible behaviors associated with death.

Title: JAZZ

Logline: After he's released from jail, a blind man must decide his future: will he continue with the gang life or take a risk on love and on his talent as a jazz pianist.

Synopsis: JAZZ captures the fear, challenge, hope, rebirth and love of a Washington, DC projects-dwelling gang member named CHRISTIAN who is blinded in a convenience store robbery caper forced on him by the gang that is his only real family. Five years in prison later he is released and accosted again by a rival gang, but rescued by a vagrant street pit bull, MATEO. The rival gang wants Mateo to fight the fiercest of the gang's pit bulls in exchange for Christian's commitment to carry out a vengeance killing against a rival gang member or earn lifetime protection if Mateo wins. Christian's at a deadlock. The only way to save his dog and himself is to ace a Jazz band's piano audition and move with them to New York. NELLY, an affluent but alcohol dependent Georgetown college student he met, senses that Mateo and the music are Christian's path out, and so perhaps is she.

Title: Sight

Logline: What if the world we knew around us was a lie? What happens when we get to see the real world that has been hidden from us for the very first time?

Synopsis: The ability to see your world affects everything in your life. What if the real truth of your world was obscured by darkness? Centered on Paul Edwards, a man that is born blind, "Sight" is a very intense, character driven drama that travels from the world of darkness to the world of light, from what we believe to be real to the harsh reality of truth. Paul is orphaned at birth. He is adopted by a Preacher and his wife. He follows his adopted father into the ministry, giving his life to the very God that created him blind. As a married father, Paul is given sight through an experimental procedure. Once he receives his sight Paul now comes face to face with the realization that his life and the world he lives in were never what they seemed. Infidelity, a tragic death, and long buried faimly secrets enter into Paul's world and remove the veil of darkness that his blindness has long hidden. What he sees pushes him to commit acts his mind would never have dreamed of.